Sep 25, 2007
Assignment 3: initial work
1)
Tried to extend the picture frame so as to show the scenario which this incident takes place.
2)
This shot was taken vertically because I wanted to focus on the figure of the character. However, after the feedbacks in class, I would change it to horizontal.
3)
4)
The focus was the hand.
5)
6)
Changed the color to red so as to symbolize violence.
7)
8)
Black and white was to symbolize the state of the character --> a half conscious state.
9)
Revelation of the gender of the character. Took a mirror reflection to symbolise the "other self".
10)
This picture was to act as a stark contrast between the initial picture and the final picture.
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Through the comments given in the class:
- twist was not good, predictable gender of the main character.
- story plot does not leave a deep impression
Therefore, I have thought of changing the story into the victim becoming the culprit and the culprit becomes the victim. Basically I will be using the same pictures from 3-8, I would add pictures of the victim robbing the culprit's money. Hopefully it would turn out fine.... I would update it as soon as possible since I have to wait for my friends to be free. I would add some behind the scene pictures too! so see ya soon! =)
Tried to extend the picture frame so as to show the scenario which this incident takes place.2)
This shot was taken vertically because I wanted to focus on the figure of the character. However, after the feedbacks in class, I would change it to horizontal.3)
4)
The focus was the hand.5)
6)
Changed the color to red so as to symbolize violence.7)
8)
Black and white was to symbolize the state of the character --> a half conscious state.9)
Revelation of the gender of the character. Took a mirror reflection to symbolise the "other self".10)
This picture was to act as a stark contrast between the initial picture and the final picture.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Through the comments given in the class:
- twist was not good, predictable gender of the main character.
- story plot does not leave a deep impression
Therefore, I have thought of changing the story into the victim becoming the culprit and the culprit becomes the victim. Basically I will be using the same pictures from 3-8, I would add pictures of the victim robbing the culprit's money. Hopefully it would turn out fine.... I would update it as soon as possible since I have to wait for my friends to be free. I would add some behind the scene pictures too! so see ya soon! =)
i look upon the moon and stars at 2:40 PM
0 stars were shining bright even without the moon
0 stars were shining bright even without the moon